It took me forever to reply to this, sorry!

That feedback is making me feel even happier about the fic, thank you so much! The fact that you were into it that way, the fact that you could hear their voices, and I'm thrilled you liked the poem I chose too. It's like everything I wanted my readers to feel, you felt; this is quite a powerful feeling for me, I have to say *g*

And I see that you've also posted a comment for the other fic, so I know you found the sorta sequel :-)