SG Ficlet -like mini ficlet.
Jan. 30th, 2004 11:06 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
castalieOkay, let's put this baby on the road. I might change some stuff later, but I think it's ready to be posted here at least *g*
Totally and shamelessly PWP - just a short J/D scene that wouldn't leave me alone, so what's a girl to do, uh? Cave in and write the thing, that's what. Horny!Jack muse can be quite bossy (tell me something new), and who could resist slutty!Daniel muse? Not me!
Let's say I 'dedicate' this mini ficlet to![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
frahulettaes, webbgirl and absinthfire because our little talk wouldn't leave me alone apparently, and it made my muses sorta horny.
Who Needs Romance
Things hadn’t gone as planned: but then, Jack was used to it.
They hadn’t even taken the time to properly get naked; Daniel’s pants and briefs had been discarded, his shirt only opened enough to display a well defined chest and appetizing nipples, and Jack himself had only just had time to sit on the couch and pull his own pants down enough to free his cock before a very eager and always willing, hot archaeologist decided to do a little lap dance.
When had they both lost control of the situation, Jack wondered. Well, he didn’t know, and frankly, right now, he couldn’t care less. The only thing he cared about at the moment was the man straddling his lap and fucking himself on his cock. Each of Daniel’s thrusts was long and hard, and he seemed to impale himself deeper and deeper on his lover’s cock every time he pushed down, stimulating his prostate at each movement, and from the sounds coming from him, he didn’t plan to stop before he had to. And Jack didn’t want to see him stop either - he was literally burning from within and if his mind totally fried from the heat - well, so be it.
He pushed Daniel's opened shirt off his broad shoulders to bare more skin, effectively trapping the younger man’s arms in the process - allowing himself more room to play with the squirming body. His hands roamed over the chest, caressing the skin, and he bent his head and bit the already abused nipples.
Daniel arched up against him at the stinging sensation, taking his lover even deeper inside him, and cried out. Jack groaned at the sudden movement. He never tired of seeing his lover lose control this way - and the man was so damn sensitive! He sneaked an arm under the shirt this time and around the slicked-sweat waist, bringing Daniel even closer to him, while a second hand traveled up - he buried his fingers in the younger man’s hair in a possessive hold, and forced Daniel's head back to an almost painful angle, then he latched his lips to the crook of the now offered neck, and bit. Not enough to draw blood, but definitely hard enough that Daniel bucked against him once more, his cock trapped between their two bodies getting harder.
“Jack!” Daniel gasped, his rhythm never faltering. “Finish me, please!”
“Shhh, Danny.” Jack's own breathless reply barely made it past the busy lips. “We’re getting there.”
He ran his tongue along the neck, and went back to his lover's nipples. He sucked them now, alternating between lapping at them and nibbling the erected flesh; literally devouring them.
“Oh, God!” Daniel didn’t know how he was still able to keep the punishing pace he’d chosen earlier. He was flying at the moment, and his mind was being assaulted by what appeared to be million of little peaks of pleasure, making him shiver and squirm endlessly against the hard body of his lover. The only thing he was aware of was that he was close, and getting closer with each hard thrust. He wanted to come so badly, but what he wanted even more, was for his lover to push him over the edge - he wanted Jack’s touch to be the catalyst of his mind-blowing orgasm.
Jack knew they wouldn’t be able to wait too long, and he raised his head to kiss those sexy lips to show his lover that they would finally get what they wanted. He kept his tight hold on Daniel’s short hair, but the other hand finally worked his way between their bodies to pump Daniel’s neglected cock. He knew the friction of the younger man’s cock against his sweaty chest had kept Daniel on the edge, but he needed more, and he was more than happy to oblige. Jack took his lover in hand, curling his fingers around the hot flesh, and stroked in time with their own thrusts. He squeezed just enough so that Daniel felt like he was getting fucked on one side, and fucking his lover’s hand on the other.
“Yes, Jack, yes!” This time, Daniel knew they would achieve completion - heavy-lidded eyes settled on Jack’s face, and he couldn’t help but kiss the other man. He leant forward and took his lover’s moist lips in a bruising kiss, their tongues battling in a maddening dance.
When Daniel finally came, arching at an almost impossible angle and crying out Jack’s name, the older man swallowed the cry and made it his own by covering his lover’s mouth again before breaking apart. When his turn came and he gave himself over the maddening pleasure, he buried his head in the crook of Daniel’s neck, and held him as if he intended to never let go. Daniel sagged against him, his forehead resting against Jack’s shoulder, trying to find his breath again. He didn’t seem to want to go anywhere either.
After a few minutes, and when he was able to remember his own name, Jack left his warm nest, and softly kissed the still bent head of his lover’s. Both silent, he caressed Daniel’s hair for a while, content to just keep his archaeologist close to him, sticky as they both were. It didn’t really matter at a time like this.
Finally, Daniel sighed, a long and apparently happy sigh, and raised his head so that he was now facing Jack, shifting a bit to be more comfortable. He didn’t try to pull away from the cock still inside him, mind you - he obviously liked the feeling of being impaled on his lover, even now that they’d both come.
Jack smiled at the sated, well-fucked and quite smug look on his gorgeous lover’s face, and couldn’t resist kissing him again - soft little kisses this time. On the lips, the cheeks, the ears, he showered the flushed skin with tiny kisses. A winding down Daniel was an irresistible sight- what with that debauched look of his: naked from the waist down, his shirt open but still dangling from the shoulders... he looked so fucking hot, Jack thought.
The older man then looked at himself, and chuckled, the vibration making Daniel squirm again. “Well, Doctor Jackson. I think we did it again. One of these days, we’ll succeed in making it all the way: a nice dinner followed by a romantic evening, and afterward, long and leisurely lovemaking in a bed with the two of us totally and gloriously naked. See, Daniel, I can do romantic and I will prove it to you one of these days: the whole enchilada. Consider me a man on a mission.”
Daniel laughed at that. He freed himself of his shirt, and plastered his now naked and still flushed body against his lover, kissing him soundly. “Why, Colonel O’Neill, I have no doubt that you do belong to the officer and gentleman category, and I know you can do romantic as well as the next colonel - but as long as you do me... you won’t ever hear me complaining - no matter when and how you do it. Do you copy?” His eyebrows rose in a not-so innocent way.
Jack’s laugh accompanied his lover’s, and his arms circled the waist plastered against him.
“You’re such a little slut, Daniel.”
“And don’t you forget it.” Was the smug reply.
Jack nuzzled his archaeologist’s neck, and worked his way to the inviting mouth. “But you’re my little slut.”
A sweet kiss was bestowed from smiling lips, “And only yours.”
“Hmm,” replied a distracted Jack who was now again busy nuzzling Daniel’s neck,” and I love you for that.”
“And I love you too, Jack.” Daniel gasped when his earlobe was nibbled.
“Well, of course - what’s not to love?”
“Smug bastard.”
“And don’t you forget it.”
The End
*waves* Thank you Tai *schnuzzles*
Totally and shamelessly PWP - just a short J/D scene that wouldn't leave me alone, so what's a girl to do, uh? Cave in and write the thing, that's what. Horny!Jack muse can be quite bossy (tell me something new), and who could resist slutty!Daniel muse? Not me!
Let's say I 'dedicate' this mini ficlet to
frahulettaes, webbgirl and absinthfire because our little talk wouldn't leave me alone apparently, and it made my muses sorta horny. Who Needs Romance
Things hadn’t gone as planned: but then, Jack was used to it.
They hadn’t even taken the time to properly get naked; Daniel’s pants and briefs had been discarded, his shirt only opened enough to display a well defined chest and appetizing nipples, and Jack himself had only just had time to sit on the couch and pull his own pants down enough to free his cock before a very eager and always willing, hot archaeologist decided to do a little lap dance.
When had they both lost control of the situation, Jack wondered. Well, he didn’t know, and frankly, right now, he couldn’t care less. The only thing he cared about at the moment was the man straddling his lap and fucking himself on his cock. Each of Daniel’s thrusts was long and hard, and he seemed to impale himself deeper and deeper on his lover’s cock every time he pushed down, stimulating his prostate at each movement, and from the sounds coming from him, he didn’t plan to stop before he had to. And Jack didn’t want to see him stop either - he was literally burning from within and if his mind totally fried from the heat - well, so be it.
He pushed Daniel's opened shirt off his broad shoulders to bare more skin, effectively trapping the younger man’s arms in the process - allowing himself more room to play with the squirming body. His hands roamed over the chest, caressing the skin, and he bent his head and bit the already abused nipples.
Daniel arched up against him at the stinging sensation, taking his lover even deeper inside him, and cried out. Jack groaned at the sudden movement. He never tired of seeing his lover lose control this way - and the man was so damn sensitive! He sneaked an arm under the shirt this time and around the slicked-sweat waist, bringing Daniel even closer to him, while a second hand traveled up - he buried his fingers in the younger man’s hair in a possessive hold, and forced Daniel's head back to an almost painful angle, then he latched his lips to the crook of the now offered neck, and bit. Not enough to draw blood, but definitely hard enough that Daniel bucked against him once more, his cock trapped between their two bodies getting harder.
“Jack!” Daniel gasped, his rhythm never faltering. “Finish me, please!”
“Shhh, Danny.” Jack's own breathless reply barely made it past the busy lips. “We’re getting there.”
He ran his tongue along the neck, and went back to his lover's nipples. He sucked them now, alternating between lapping at them and nibbling the erected flesh; literally devouring them.
“Oh, God!” Daniel didn’t know how he was still able to keep the punishing pace he’d chosen earlier. He was flying at the moment, and his mind was being assaulted by what appeared to be million of little peaks of pleasure, making him shiver and squirm endlessly against the hard body of his lover. The only thing he was aware of was that he was close, and getting closer with each hard thrust. He wanted to come so badly, but what he wanted even more, was for his lover to push him over the edge - he wanted Jack’s touch to be the catalyst of his mind-blowing orgasm.
Jack knew they wouldn’t be able to wait too long, and he raised his head to kiss those sexy lips to show his lover that they would finally get what they wanted. He kept his tight hold on Daniel’s short hair, but the other hand finally worked his way between their bodies to pump Daniel’s neglected cock. He knew the friction of the younger man’s cock against his sweaty chest had kept Daniel on the edge, but he needed more, and he was more than happy to oblige. Jack took his lover in hand, curling his fingers around the hot flesh, and stroked in time with their own thrusts. He squeezed just enough so that Daniel felt like he was getting fucked on one side, and fucking his lover’s hand on the other.
“Yes, Jack, yes!” This time, Daniel knew they would achieve completion - heavy-lidded eyes settled on Jack’s face, and he couldn’t help but kiss the other man. He leant forward and took his lover’s moist lips in a bruising kiss, their tongues battling in a maddening dance.
When Daniel finally came, arching at an almost impossible angle and crying out Jack’s name, the older man swallowed the cry and made it his own by covering his lover’s mouth again before breaking apart. When his turn came and he gave himself over the maddening pleasure, he buried his head in the crook of Daniel’s neck, and held him as if he intended to never let go. Daniel sagged against him, his forehead resting against Jack’s shoulder, trying to find his breath again. He didn’t seem to want to go anywhere either.
After a few minutes, and when he was able to remember his own name, Jack left his warm nest, and softly kissed the still bent head of his lover’s. Both silent, he caressed Daniel’s hair for a while, content to just keep his archaeologist close to him, sticky as they both were. It didn’t really matter at a time like this.
Finally, Daniel sighed, a long and apparently happy sigh, and raised his head so that he was now facing Jack, shifting a bit to be more comfortable. He didn’t try to pull away from the cock still inside him, mind you - he obviously liked the feeling of being impaled on his lover, even now that they’d both come.
Jack smiled at the sated, well-fucked and quite smug look on his gorgeous lover’s face, and couldn’t resist kissing him again - soft little kisses this time. On the lips, the cheeks, the ears, he showered the flushed skin with tiny kisses. A winding down Daniel was an irresistible sight- what with that debauched look of his: naked from the waist down, his shirt open but still dangling from the shoulders... he looked so fucking hot, Jack thought.
The older man then looked at himself, and chuckled, the vibration making Daniel squirm again. “Well, Doctor Jackson. I think we did it again. One of these days, we’ll succeed in making it all the way: a nice dinner followed by a romantic evening, and afterward, long and leisurely lovemaking in a bed with the two of us totally and gloriously naked. See, Daniel, I can do romantic and I will prove it to you one of these days: the whole enchilada. Consider me a man on a mission.”
Daniel laughed at that. He freed himself of his shirt, and plastered his now naked and still flushed body against his lover, kissing him soundly. “Why, Colonel O’Neill, I have no doubt that you do belong to the officer and gentleman category, and I know you can do romantic as well as the next colonel - but as long as you do me... you won’t ever hear me complaining - no matter when and how you do it. Do you copy?” His eyebrows rose in a not-so innocent way.
Jack’s laugh accompanied his lover’s, and his arms circled the waist plastered against him.
“You’re such a little slut, Daniel.”
“And don’t you forget it.” Was the smug reply.
Jack nuzzled his archaeologist’s neck, and worked his way to the inviting mouth. “But you’re my little slut.”
A sweet kiss was bestowed from smiling lips, “And only yours.”
“Hmm,” replied a distracted Jack who was now again busy nuzzling Daniel’s neck,” and I love you for that.”
“And I love you too, Jack.” Daniel gasped when his earlobe was nibbled.
“Well, of course - what’s not to love?”
“Smug bastard.”
“And don’t you forget it.”
The End
*waves* Thank you Tai *schnuzzles*
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Date: 2004-01-30 02:10 pm (UTC)*schnuzzles back* No worries, hun! I mean it was Danny and Jack, hot and sweaty... need I say more, it was a pleasure betaing this ;P!
Re:
Date: 2004-01-30 03:39 pm (UTC)But still, I'm always grateful for your help *g*
Holy Hannah
Date: 2004-01-30 02:34 pm (UTC)Thanks for sharing.
Re: Holy Hannah
Date: 2004-01-30 03:42 pm (UTC)Thank you for the comment! It was definitely nice to hear *g* I'm glad you liked it, believe me- dedicating a story to someone and having this someone hate the fic isn't really nice- although, well, I would understand it, of course *sigh* But since it's not the case, can I go tell you again that I'm pleased? *g*
Re: Holy Hannah
Date: 2004-01-30 02:46 pm (UTC)giggle, snuffle, snicker...
bwahahahahahah
bet danny's not complaining either..
J
Re: Holy Hannah
Date: 2004-01-30 02:59 pm (UTC)Re: Holy Hannah
Date: 2004-01-30 03:43 pm (UTC)Re: Holy Hannah
Date: 2004-02-04 03:06 pm (UTC)What act?? I'm a sweet innocent *cough*...Okay, I can't even get that one out.
I'm corrupted and more than likely to do some corrupting myself. Any smutfic that I can help encourage...all the better. *vbeg*
Re: Holy Hannah
Date: 2004-01-30 03:42 pm (UTC)Re: Holy Hannah
Date: 2004-01-30 03:48 pm (UTC)well it is Jack, after all.
snort.
Doesn't that say it all?
That and the screaming o
no subject
Date: 2004-01-31 05:37 am (UTC)This was fantastic, and hot and I'm so pleased I skipped back so much to find it!
I loved it :)