Oh man. That was just gorgeous. Kissing is so hot and really needs to be explored more.
Then he took a shuddering breath; he plastered himself against Charlie, not allowing even the smallest space between their bodies, and held him tight. He buried his head in Charlie's neck, needing to feel him, to smell him, needing the reassurance that everything was fine, everything was back to normal; wanting to know, without the shadow of a doubt, deep inside him, that Charlie was here by his side, where he belonged.
Sorry for the long quotes, but just, yes. The connection between them is so there. I can visualise the scene so easily.
He was kissing Charlie, warm, pliant Charlie, and Charlie was kissing him back, trying to crawl inside him, making all those sweet little noises he always made, rendered even sexier due to the fact that they had to stay as silent as possible, and Don could have stayed that way forever.
Kissing noises. *flails* So sweet and loving and hot. Man, you're so good at this.
He just kissed Charlie one last time, long and deep and, when he pulled away - for good this time - he couldn't help pressing his pelvis against Charlie roughly, just once.
It's the rough pelvis thrust that gets me every time. *shivers*
I loved this so much. Not that it's a surprise, your writing always hits my buttons.
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Date: 2006-05-10 01:53 pm (UTC)Then he took a shuddering breath; he plastered himself against Charlie, not allowing even the smallest space between their bodies, and held him tight. He buried his head in Charlie's neck, needing to feel him, to smell him, needing the reassurance that everything was fine, everything was back to normal; wanting to know, without the shadow of a doubt, deep inside him, that Charlie was here by his side, where he belonged.
Sorry for the long quotes, but just, yes. The connection between them is so there. I can visualise the scene so easily.
He was kissing Charlie, warm, pliant Charlie, and Charlie was kissing him back, trying to crawl inside him, making all those sweet little noises he always made, rendered even sexier due to the fact that they had to stay as silent as possible, and Don could have stayed that way forever.
Kissing noises. *flails* So sweet and loving and hot. Man, you're so good at this.
He just kissed Charlie one last time, long and deep and, when he pulled away - for good this time - he couldn't help pressing his pelvis against Charlie roughly, just once.
It's the rough pelvis thrust that gets me every time. *shivers*
I loved this so much. Not that it's a surprise, your writing always hits my buttons.