TS Ficlet

Sep. 22nd, 2004 10:33 pm
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Oh boy what the hell did they do with the update page? *blink* Don't mind me, I must have missed the New Feature announcement again. It's always a shock when you're not prepared lol

Okay so back to the original post :

I'm apparently back to spam your flists my LJ - which is actually a good thing even though you may not agree. Thing is, in the past week LJ was more or less boring me. Not even kidding, so I'm quite pleased to see that this is the third post for today. Though I promise I'll stop for today maybe.

First and because [livejournal.com profile] starwatcher307 sent the betaed version of my fic in record time, here my latest TS piece, written for the book challenge at [livejournal.com profile] sentinel_thurs :

Title: I Said No, Sandburg!
Category: Slash
Story Notes: I'd say this is sweetly cliched, but it seems to be a theme that I find amusing, so there *g*

"I said no, Sandburg – what part of NO didn't you understand!" Jim shifted a bit on his seat and turned his attention back to the building they were supposed to watch, going for silent and dismissive, hoping Blair would get the hint.

Of course he didn't and Jim's harsh words and supposedly deadly glare were beautifully ignored when, in a move that would have made even the best black op soldier proud, Blair freed his lover's cock from its denim prison, forced Jim to lift his hips so that he could push pants and briefs down at his convenience, and swallowed him whole – using all his best tricks immediately and going to town, so to speak.

There was not a lot one Jim Ellison could do at this point, except curse at least once to show that disobedience was not a polite thing to do to your partner and just accept the fact that he was in for a ride.

Jim looked down at the head bobbing up and down on him and groaned at the erotic sight and the oh so sexy sounds of his lover sucking him. He didn't utter a word though –-intelligible, that is-– just let his hips do the talking for him. Pushing up and down in time with Blair's own movements, Jim fucked his mouth in earnest, showing Blair how much he turned him on. Jim's hands then firmly fisted in his lover's hair to add new sensations –-for him, but also for his Guide, who liked it when he was manhandled this way-- and roughly clenched and unclenched them in a steady rhythm. He surrendered to the pleasure – ecstasy even, of Blair's talent at sucking him and felt as if his whole body was just one huge nerve. The younger man had always known how to use his mouth, and it wasn't just to offer the world the wonder of obfuscation – oh no!

Blair knew how to play with him, knew what pleased him the most, knew his reactions by heart and took advantage of the knowledge as only a long-time lover knew how. Jim always felt as if his cock was worshipped by the younger man; there were no other words for it. There wasn't an inch that didn't receive attention – he was sucked, tongued and played with, endlessly, maddeningly. His balls weren't neglected either and, as he lifted his hips higher to give Blair more room to manoeuver, they were licked, touched, caressed and rolled by talented tongue and fingers as well. He couldn't help but shiver at the sensory overload that his lover was creating for him, waiting for the moment when it would get too much – hoping it would be soon because he was so close, he wanted to come and he wanted to come now.

As if reading his thoughts, Blair used his Best Trick as they both called it, that thing with the back of his throat that always got to Jim. Time suddenly stopped for the older man and when he finally came, it felt like an explosion of senses and cells – his whole body was exploding in a million little pieces of ecstasy.

*~*~*

After what seemed an eternity but hadn't lasted more than a few seconds, he looked at Blair, who was sensually licking his lips with a completely satisfied look on his face.

"So," Blair started slowly, looking smug and entirely debauched, "will you revise that oh so stupid 'no sex in the truck' rule?"

"I guess I will," Jim replied, his voice hoarse. He was still attacked by thousands of little peaks of pleasure – it felt like his whole body was humming.

"See, I told you that every rule was negotiable. Depending on your motivation."

"You're such a smug little shit, you know that?"

Blair didn't answer – just smiled and ghosted his hand over Jim's spent but over-sensitive cock, making him shiver.

Jim kissed his lover deeply. "You never do anything by the book, do you?" he whispered.

The touch became more insistent. Blair leant forward and nibbled his lover's ear, blowing on it softly. "And don't you forget it."

Fin

Me and blowjob scenes aren't the best of friends - we don't really talk to each other, as in we just don't, ever - but well, with some tricks it's apparently possible to pull at least a little one, who would have thought? lol

Second, come and help build a virtual skyscraper in honour of your favourite actors - and when I say that, I mean build one for RB and GM. RDA and MS already have huge buildings - think of our TS men, please? Apparently neither Richard nor Garett even had a building 'til yesterday, but the horrid news spread all over the place and they have a nice one now - I actually saw lot of people from my flist over there, but in case some of you didn't know about it... well now you know, and you don't have any excuse not to add your brick for RB and GM *pout* So if you want to play and add a brick with a little message for them, well follow the grey brick road *points above*

PS: Btw, about my cous'? His grades were among the best, so it's at least going in the right direction. Now we'll have to wait until December to have the final results *still crossing fingers*

Date: 2004-09-22 03:02 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (blair)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
I still love it. Such a hot story ;)

I've also been off bricklaying. Nice link btw *g*

Date: 2004-09-23 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] castalie.livejournal.com
Thanks, still love hearing it lol

And yes, I just saw - cute website, isn't it? And now our boys have their own nice buildings. Did you see one for your Victor?

Date: 2004-09-23 04:37 am (UTC)
ext_1650: (Bren and you wonder)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
Those buildings sure are nice.

Nope, none for my boy, I've sent an e-mail so hopefully 9 others will too.

Date: 2004-09-23 05:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] castalie.livejournal.com
I've sent an e-mail so hopefully 9 others will too.

I had the feeling you would *g*

Date: 2004-09-23 06:50 am (UTC)
ext_1650: (arghhh)
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

You have a Mulder icon!!!!!!!

I want one too!!!!

Which is me saying, am I that predictable? ;)

Date: 2004-09-22 03:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ginalin.livejournal.com
Well, that blew my mind. Another one of Jim's rules blew to hell. (one good cliche deserves another or two)

I have a thing for car sex, you tease.

Date: 2004-09-23 03:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] castalie.livejournal.com
Clichés are good - I usually like to read them well enough. Well obviously I also like to write them well enough lol

And thanks for the feedback, always a pleasure to read too *g* Glad it pushed one of your button *eg*

Date: 2004-09-23 08:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tobyfan.livejournal.com
Very nice work, Mouse. I do think you and blow jobs scenes are friends now. ;)

Date: 2004-09-23 12:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] castalie.livejournal.com
Thank you Anne, I'm glad it worked for you too *g*

I do think you and blow jobs scenes are friends now.

We may be more friendly in the future after all lol

Date: 2004-09-23 11:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yami-tai.livejournal.com
I really liked the fic, not too many details but just enough to let the old imagination kick in ^_~! Sorry I wasn't around to beta it...

Date: 2004-09-23 12:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] castalie.livejournal.com
I've talked about this with some of our member at [livejournal.com profile] sentinel_thurs. As I see it, when other writers know how to really detail the scene and take their readers on a scenery tour, I take mine on a short cut lol Still, it worked for more people than I thought, so I'm definitely happy with the result *g*

Thanks for taking the time to comment *g* And don't apologise, you were sorta busy in London lol

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